Agha Shahid Ali
The poem is a lesson prescribed for the first-degree students of certain universities.
The present plan is for the teachers for three hours of face-to-face teaching in the classroom and another two hours for students’ home tasks, within a week’s duration.
Learners of the poem may also find this teaching-plan as a self-instructional material.
Following is the text of the poem;
Postcard from Kashmir
Kashmir shrinks into my mailbox,
my home a neat four by six inches.
my home a neat four by six inches.
I always loved neatness. Now I hold
the half-inch Himalayas in my hand.
the half-inch Himalayas in my hand.
This is home. And this the closest
I'll ever be to home. When I return,
the colours won't be so brilliant,
the Jhelum's waters so clean,
so ultramarine. My love
so overexposed.
I'll ever be to home. When I return,
the colours won't be so brilliant,
the Jhelum's waters so clean,
so ultramarine. My love
so overexposed.
And my memory will be a little
out of focus, in it
a giant negative, black
and white, still undeveloped.
out of focus, in it
a giant negative, black
and white, still undeveloped.
Courtesy to: https://www.poetrynook.com/poem/postcard-kashmir
The poem is to be taught with the following objectives;
a) The students read to comprehend the events and environment described in the poem.
b) The students make an attempt to analyze the poem to find out the moral/message.
c) They discuss the social and political issues related to the theme of the poem.
d) They make an attempt to find out the symbols used and the relevance of the poem in the modern time
Materials required: Computer, the landscape of hills and valley, LCD projector, screen and map of India-Pakistan.
Day 1 (one hour)
Though Kashmir is thousands of kilometres away, the picture of Kashmir is live in your mind.
You have seen the photos of hills, valleys, lakes and gardens in Kashmir.
How beautiful they are.
Jawaharlal Nehru has told about Kashmir, ‘if there is a heaven on earth, it is this, it is this, it is this.’
Can you draw the beauty of Kashmir on a sheet of paper?
They try to draw the scenery.
Let them describe the beauty of Kashmir in a paragraph.
After writing the paragraph they exchange the notebook with others in the class and read the paragraph.
Two or three present the paragraph in the whole class. (25 mts)
Suppose, Kashmir is your birthplace.
But for a longer time, you are away from Kashmir.
Due to some problems, you are not in a position to go back to Kashmir.
As a person living in a land of exile, you feel nostalgic about Kashmir.
You are disappointed about your homeland.
Can you describe those thoughts of hopelessness, dissatisfaction and conflict about Kashmir?
Write two or three stanzas to formulate a poem.
They try to write some stanzas.
They exchange the notebook to read the creations of others.
If they read the creations, they write two or three comments about the stanzas. (25 mts)
(Showing the poem on the screen) Look, here is a poem with the same feeling.
Kashmir shrinks into my mailbox,
my home a neat four by six inches.
I always loved neatness. Now I hold
the half-inch Himalayas in my hand.
This is home. And this the closest
I'll ever be to home. When I return, the colours won't be so brilliant, the Jhelum's waters so clean, so ultramarine. My love so overexposed.
And my memory will be a little
out of focus, in it a giant negative, black and white, still undeveloped. |
Read the poem.
Please note/underline the new words, if any.
You may get the definition of the words from the glossary or dictionary.
Try to write the summary of the poem, as you understand. (10 mts)
If you want more time to write the summary, do it as a homework.
Day 2 (one hour)
All of you get ready with the homework of writing the summary.
Two or three present the summary of the poem in the whole class.
Teacher comments on the presentation of the summary.
Read the poem once again, is there anything that you require definition.
Sometimes, a word may be familiar to you.
But it may be used to show a different meaning in the poem.
For example, the word ‘overexposed’
What is the meaning of the word ‘overexposed’?
Yes, that is a word generally heard about photography.
Means, too much light with the photograph.
Here, in the poem, it means the overwhelming love for Kashmir.
(If there is a need for any other explanation, the teacher gives it) (10 mts)
The poem uses a number of terms related to photography.
Read the poem from the beginning to the end.
Write a list of such terms, terms related to photography.
Let them write a list of terms.
They present the list.
Teacher presents her list.
These are the terms I could find;
closest
colour
overexposed
out of focus
negative
black and white
undeveloped
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Are the terms appropriate to the context?
Why does the poet use these terms selectively?
Yes, these are expressions of the poet to reveal the details about the picture in his mind about Kashmir. (20 mts)
Likewise, what are the expressions used here to share the nostalgic feeling?
Let them find out certain expressions and present them in the whole class.
Which lines show the beauty of Kashmir?
After their attempt to present the lines, the teacher presents her answer.
1. The sentence ‘When I return the colours…’
2. The line ‘the Jhelum waters…’
Above are the lines that denote the beauty of Kashmir.
Yet another assessment about the poem is that it belongs to the diaspora literature.
Diaspora, what does it mean.
Diaspora means, anything related to the people who are scattered and exiled from the homeland.
This poem is a piece of literature of someone who is in exile, means the author himself.
Agha Shahit Ali is the author.
Read the paragraph about the author in your textbook.
They read the paragraph about the author’s life and contributions. (15 mts)
I repeat the question ‘How does this poem become a piece of diaspora literature?’
Agha Shahid Ali was born in Kashmir, but left to the US.
From 1976 he was in the US till his death in 2001 in Massachusetts.
Shahid Ali had his roots in Kashmir.
Though he became an American writer, how far he can forget his birthplace and the social and political issues in his homeland?
The social and political issues in his homeland might have haunted him.
This is how the poem belongs to the genre of diaspora literature.
Michael Collier, an American poet told once;
(Teacher shows the words of Michael Collier on the screen)
''As a Kashmiri, Ali is aware of the historical vicissitudes that breed violence and hatred in people who once lived together peacefully. His poems speak to the enduring qualities of love and friendship. With elegance and wit, they also speak to the difficulty of maintaining such relationships.''
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Courtesy to: https://www.nytimes.com/2001/12/26/arts/agha-shahid-ali-52-a-poet-who-had-roots-in-kashmir.html
Yes, these words are about Ali’s love and friendship towards his homeland.
Ali is proud of being one, though he faces many difficulties in maintaining the relationship with his homeland.
Yesterday you made an attempt to write the summary of the poem.
Please revise the summary on the light of today’s discussions.
Teacher gives instructions to complete the homework. (15 mts)
Day 3 (one hour)
Two or three students present their homework.
(Pointing out the text of the poem) Look, the poem is very short.
It has certain messages to be conveyed to the readers.
Can you find out any message or moral of the poem?
If they make an attempt to say the message, the teacher encourages them.
Teacher asks them to explain the messages. (15 mts)
I also could find certain messages.
Teacher writes the following sentences on the board.
a) One cannot forget her/his roots.
b) Love towards one’s homeland haunts even in a happy life in exile.
c) Political disputes among nations are alarming the citizens, wherever they are. (10 mts)
There are some other issues related to the theme of the poem.
Have you ever thought of the mood of the writer, when he was writing this poem?
Let the students try to answer the question.
He had a turbulent mind while he was writing the poem.
The poet had a push and pull in his mind.
What was the push and pull in his mind?
Yes, the push was to go back to see Kashmir or to re-join the beauty of the homeland.
The pull was the negative feeling about the social and political environment in Kashmir.
There is a scope for writing an essay on the conflict in the poet.
Teacher writes the topic of the essay on the board.
“Postcard from Kashmir brings before us the natural beauty of Kashmir on one hand and its grim reality on the other.”
We are planning to write a full-fledged essay on this topic.
Think about how we can write an essay in 300 words about the topic.
Suppose we are writing six paragraphs, each paragraph with a distinct sub-theme.
(Pointing out the blank table) We are planning the essay with the help of this table.
Paragraph No.
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Central idea of the paragraph
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Questions for self-thought to elicit the content of each paragraph
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1.
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Introduction of the essay
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‘Homeland is something one becomes aware of only through its loss.’
What is the meaning of this quote of Gunter Grass?
How is it applicable when we think about Shahid Ali’s poem?
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2.
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3.
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4.
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5.
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6.
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The conclusion of the essay
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‘I say there is not more happiness for me than the freedom of my Homeland’ Islom Karimov
If we end the essay with another quote like this, what is the meaning of the quote? |
The students work individually and then sit in pairs to plan and write in the columns.
After their presentation of the plan, the teacher can show her plan as follows;
Paragraph No.
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Central idea of the paragraph
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Questions for self-thought to elicit the content of each paragraph
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1.
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Introduction of the essay
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‘Homeland is something one becomes aware of only through its loss.’
What is the meaning of the quote of Gunter Grass?
How is it applicable when we think about Shahid Ali’s poem?
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2.
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The beauty of Kashmir
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What beautiful scenes are generally seen in Kashmir?
Can you compare the beauty of Kashmir with that of any other place?
Why is it known as the paradise on earth?
What are the things that enchant the poet?
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3.
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Social and political turbulence in Kashmir
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What is the origin of political turbulence in Kashmir?
Why does Kashmir continue to be an issue?
What is the aftermath of the disputes for Kashmir?
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4.
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The push and pull in the mind of the poet
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What is the reason for the pull?
What is the reason for the push?
What decision may the poet take?
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5.
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Dissatisfied and disappointed poet
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How does the poet share his dissatisfaction in the poem?
How does the poet share his disappointment?
What are his expressions in the poem?
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6.
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The conclusion of the essay
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‘I say there is not more happiness for me than the freedom of my Homeland’ Islom Karimov
If we end the essay with another quote like this, what is the meaning of the quote? |
(The questions are triggers to channelize the thoughts of the students to frame the content of each paragraph)
Sequence your explanation to formulate the essay.
Do it as an assignment.