Thursday, 21 December 2017

The Burning of the Books



(Poem by Bertolt Brecht)

How to teach?

The classroom process for the teaching of the poem in the cognitive paradigm is shown below. This plan for face-to-face teaching is for three hours in three days. Level expected is the first-degree students who learn English Language and Literature as an optional.

1.  Objectives of teaching the lesson:

a)  Students make an attempt to write a poem on par with the emotion that the poet had while his books were burned
b)  They analyze the poem so as to appreciate it.
c)  They trace the history and environment against which the poem was written by the poet.

2.  Materials required: 
Blank sheets of paper, bold marker, mobile/laptop with the net connection, LCD projector.

3.  The poem
When the Regime
commanded the unlawful books to be burned,
teams of dull oxen hauled huge cartloads to the bonfires.

Then a banished writer, one of the best,
scanning the list of excommunicated texts,
became enraged: he'd been excluded!

He rushed to his desk, full of contemptuous wrath,
to write fierce letters to the morons in power —
Burn me! He wrote with his blazing pen —
Haven't I always reported the truth?
Now here you are, treating me like a liar!
Burn me!

(Translated by Michael R. Burch) 

Day one (one hour)

          For a moment shall we imagine something like this?
           You are a writer.
           You write poems, stories, and essays.                                                            
           You publish your creations.
           You have thousands of readers who wait for your creations.
Through your creations, you question certain misbeliefs and taboos.
           Through your creations, you challenge political parties.
            You are a writer with democracy as your philosophy.
You criticise governmental policies detrimental to the well-being of the people
Automatically you are a pain in the neck of the government and political parties
They burn your books and poems in a ceremony to disgrace you.
Someway you came to know about the function of burning your books.
You rush to the scene to watch it.
You look at that scene.
What you could see was a heart-breaking scene of people burring your books.
They are celebrating the burning of books.

Photo credit      https://poetrydispatch.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/bertolt-brecht-the-burning-of-the-books-bad-time-for-poetry-reading-the-paper-while-brewing-the-tea/
Look at the photograph.
The crowd is burning the books.
(After a pause teacher asks)
Can you transcribe your emotions on a sheet of paper?
When they get ready to write their emotions, teacher interacts;
            I expect two or three stanzas from you;
Teacher shows the plan of stanzas on the board as follows;
            ……………………………………………………..
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            ……………………………………………………..
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Let them take 15 – 20 minutes to write the stanzas.
After the first attempt, the teacher asks them to edit or refine the lines.
They refine the lines.
Teacher distributes blank sheets to the students.
They write the fair of the stanzas.
They complete the fair and the teacher collects the sheets from them, teacher says;
            Look, these are your poems.
            We bind the pages now to make a ‘book’.
Teacher staples the pages and asks;
            The poem book is ready, don’t we want a name for this collection?
They suggest names to the book.
From several names, the class decides one, and that name is assigned to the book.
One student writes the title using a bold marker.
            Shall have a function in the class inaugurating this book.
Teacher initiates to write an agenda.
            Who will be the chairperson of the meeting?
            Who will welcome the audience?
            Who will vote thanks?
The class conducts the meeting.
The poem book is sent to the library.



Day 2 (one hour)

            Yesterday you wrote a poem.
            It was with almost the same emotions that had been shared by a poet.
There is a poem for you to learn.
            Take out your mobiles and search the poem.


The Burning of the Books
(By Bertolt Brecht)

Teacher shows them the original poem in German language, on the screen.
            (Though German is unfamiliar to them, let them make a rude attempt to read and understand. The purpose is to see the original poem in the German language, not to teach German)
            Now search for an English translation.
They search the internet for any translation.
Teacher shows the translation of Michael R. Burch and says;
          This is one translation, there can be other translations.
          Now try to read the poem to write the summary.
They make an attempt to read the poem.
          There are certain unfamiliar or new words for you.
Or, there are certain words familiar, but you don’t understand the inner meaning.
          Please underline the words unfamiliar to you.
They underline the unfamiliar words.
          Sometimes, your friends can help you to get at the meaning.
          Ask them for their help.
They discuss the contextual meaning of the new words.
If the friends fail, get the meaning from any web dictionary.
They take the mobile to get at the meaning of the new words.
(Following can be the unfamiliar words for those who have English as the second or third language in their education)

Dull oxen (here a figurative use)
Contemptuous
Excommunicated
Enraged
Morons
Wrath             
        Now the barriers of new words are over.
        Write the summary of the poem in a paragraph.
They write the summary as a homework.
Also, you read different web pages to understand the days and environment against which Brecht wrote the poem in Germany.


Day 3 (one hour)

They exchange the summary of the poem with others.
Two or three are presented in the whole class.
The writer is emotional and angry.
He felt he was burned.
But the story has a twist.
What is the twist?
That event made the poet angry.
What is that event?
Through examining the lines, they make an attempt to find out that particular line of the twist.  
          Ask your friends about their idea.
Two or three express their idea.
          Yes, that is the reason;
The poet came with a protest in his mind to see the burning of books.
But when he enquired he understood that his books were excluded from burning.
          This was shocking to him, he is excluded from the list.
          Read, what happens after that?
They read the remaining lines of the poem.
          What happens after that?
          Yes, he rushes into his room and takes the pen.
          The pen is always the sword of the writer.
          He scribbles his rage into words.
          Read the last three or four lines of the poem.
They read the lines attentively.
          Suppose, this poem is a story.
          The story means, some events in a sequence.
          What are the events presented in the poem?
          Look, the poet is the only character visible here.
          What are the events?
They try to enlist the events.
Teacher shows the following model to write the list of events.
  
1.   ……………………………………………..
2.   ……………………………………………..
3.   ……………………………………………..
4.   In an anger he writes some lines.

They complete the list and present it to the whole class.
          The poet was spitting fire onto the paper.
          What are the harsh words of the poet?
          Can you imagine the raging face of the poet?
          Take your pencil to draw his turbulent face and body?
They draw the angry poet.
What is the reason for his anger?
They read the poem once again.
They discuss the reason with their friends.
          The reason is clear from the sixth line of the poem.
          Yes, the poet has been excluded from the list.
          Why should he be dissatisfied with the exclusion?
Students try to say their arguments.
          Yes, as a writer he wished to be included in the ‘hit list’.
          But the regime has excluded him from the list.
          He felt that it was a clear disgrace to him.
Books of Karl Marx, Helen Keller, Sigmund Freud, H.G. Wells and sixty others were burned.
          As writers, their commitment to the society has been approved.
          With the burning of books by the government, they have been glorified.
          The poet dreamed of such an ending.
          But his books had been excluded.
          This is the real reason for his rage.
          That is the twist of the story, as well as the poem.

          Have you heard any quotes on the power of books?
          Here is one;
There are worse crimes than burning books. One of them is not reading them.
           –Joseph Brodsky
           Quote credit    https://ebookfriendly.com/best-quotes-books-reading/
Please say the meaning of the quote.
Shall I show you one more quote?
‘Let us remember, one book, one pen, one child, and one teacher can change the world’
Guess the author of the quote.
If you can’t guess, search and find out.

Books are most powerful agents of social change.
Find some more similar quotes.
They search as many quotes as they can related to the theme of the poem.
They present certain quotes and try to define the quotes.
          Now we complete the analysis of the poem of Bertolt Brecht.
          I have the one more question.
          What are the messages of the poem to the readers?

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Wednesday, 6 December 2017

The old prison

How to teach the poem, ‘The old prison’ is discussed here. This is a plan for teachers to teach the poem in a face-to-face mode in senior secondary or degree classes, taking two hours in two days.

The rows of cells are unroofed,
a flute for the wind's mouth,
who comes with a breath of ice
from the blue caves of the south.

O dark and fierce day:
the wind like an angry bee
hunts for the black honey
in the pits of the hollow sea.

Waves of shadow wash
the empty shell bone-bare,
and like a bone it sings
a bitter song of air.

Who built and laboured here?
The wind and the sea say
-Their cold nest is broken
and they are blown away-

They did not breed nor love,
each in his cell alone
cried as the wind now cries
through this flute of stone. 


Objectives of the teaching of the poem:
a)     Students make an attempt to write a poem representing their emotions over a lonely prison on sea shore
b)     They examine the richness of the imagery of the poem, the old prison.
c)     They analyze the poem to trace out the message/s of the poem

Day 1 (one hour)
Shall we have a trip to Australia?
We are now at Trail Bay.
The teacher points out Trail Bay on the map of Australia.
Showing the photograph of the prison teacher says;

  


Now we are in the prison.
We are visiting the prison.
The prison is on the shore, facing the sea.
The prison has no roof, it was to give more miseries to the prisoners.
What one can see now are the walls, pillars and cells.
(Pointing out the photograph) Now, this is a monument.
About 500 prisoners were put in this prison.
They were soldiers arrested from the battlefield in World War II.
Once put in the prison, that was the end of the prisoner.
As the prison is isolated near the sea, there is no way to run away.
In the sea, there were sharks and other wild fish.
Life was ended in the cells of the prison.
The cruelty of man upon man.

What are your feelings and emotions?
Can’t you transcribe those feelings on a sheet of paper?
Or type it on your keyboard.
While they try to write one or two stanzas, the teacher asks some more questions.
            What images will you use?
            What messages will you give through the stanzas?
When they complete at least two stanzas they present their creations in small groups.
Two or three students present their creations to the whole class.

You wrote some stanzas on the basis of the feelings you had when you saw the prison, didn’t you?
Here is a poem ‘The old prison’ written by Judith Wright with almost similar feelings.

            Read the poem.

They read the poem on the screen or on the pages of the textbook.
Are there any new words?
If there are any new words, get the help of your friends or use your dictionary.
But I think that almost all words are familiar to you.
Think beyond the literal meaning of the objects.
For example, what is the meaning of black honey?
They try to examine the poem in-depth.
            What are the images used in the poem?
            The poem has two parts;

The first part describes the prison, and the second part shows the dissatisfaction of the poetess on the heartless approach towards the prisoners.

The class ends with assigning the following home-task.

a)     Write a summary of the poem.
b)     Refer any sites and write about the poetess and her area of interest.

Day 2 (one hour)

            Please take out the home works done.
            Share your homework with a friend.
One or two summaries are presented in the whole class.

This poem is rich with images.
The poetess is drawing several pictures on the mind of the readers.
As well as, there are lots of comparisons of different things.

How are the cells compared?
The wind is compared with different things. What are they?
The skeleton of the prison is also compared with something. What is that?

Next attempt of the teacher is to take the initiative that the students analyze the entire poem.
For that, teacher shows certain models;

a)     Judith Wright had an outlook against the war. She was harsh towards war.
What are the sentences that show the harshness of the writer?
b)     Has the poem any messages? What are they?
c)     Critics are of opinion that the poem is questioning human rights violation.
What were the human rights annihilated in the prison?
d)     The poem is rich with symbols. What are the symbols used in the poem? What do they symbolize?
e)     Though the poem was written five or six decades ago, has it any relevance in the modern times? Why?

Class answers the above questions in their own ways.

Students take an opportunity to frame some analytical question like the above ones and exchange them in the class.

Don’t you like to write a letter congratulating the poetess for writing such a beautiful and provocative poem? Let the relatives and well-wishers of Judith Wright read that letter. Write it.

Testing the learning of literature (poem)


Read another prison poem. Compare this with “the old prison’ written by Judith Wright.

(Courtesy:  https://www.scrapbook.com/poems/doc/42997.html)

THE PRISON WALLS OF LIFE
Image result for The old prison  Judith wright - imagefour walls of bars with no doors
is this what life is made of
days get harder and the walls starts to close in
and one thing comes to mind
why did i take this path
nights of sorrow and days of shame
i just want the sunshine and not all the rain
my heart is black and my flesh is cold
i seek for the truth and happiness
but all i get is the lies and sadness
tell me why this happens
im no longer in control
i gave up some years ago
as life passes me by and people come and go
i search and i look but i can’t find the door
i can’t change my past
but i try to change my future
the life beyond the bars is the one i hope to live
i am a prisoner who wants to be free
Author: Brittany M.